16. The inciting incident is, by no means, an optional plot point. Without a life-altering event to catapult our characters in one direction or another, there isn’t a story.
Ava Jae,
Plot Essentials: Inciting Incident
17. The pre-middle consists of the time period between receiving the invitation and the start of the “meaty” action. This is a great time for your hero to take a short trip, where he can naturally observe new things without “information-dumping” on the reader.
Christine H.,
What Every Writer Should Know About Their Novel’s Pre-Middle
18. Antagonists rule the middle and are there to teach the protagonist what she needs to know in order to prevail at the climax at the end.
Martha Alderson,
How to Turn a Lackluster Middle into Page-turning Excitement
19. Before the Mid-Point both the hero and the reader experience the story with limited awareness of the real truth behind what’s going on. Because it reveals significant new information, everything after the Mid-Point carries new weight and dramatic tension.
Larry Brooks,
Story Structure Series: #6 — Wrapping Your Head Around the Mid-Point Milestone
20. The midpoint moment is the moment that tells us what the novel or movie is all about.
James Scott Bell,
Write from the Middle
Tweetable: The midpoint shift and the mirror moment are scene and sequel. Revelation and realization. External and internal.
21. At the Second Plot Point you can smell the ending just around the corner, whereas in the scene before you couldn’t. And yet, you’re not sure what it will be.
Larry Brooks,
Story Structure Series: #8 – The Second Plot Point
22. The All Is Lost moment is powerful because it is primal. It reaches down into the core of our beings and takes what we fear in our lives and makes those things real.
Cory Milles,
When All Is Lost, Your Story Succeeds
23. Your black moment isn’t black enough until the reader, and possibly even you as the writer, can’t see a way out.
Kara Lennox,
Plot Fixer: Weak Black Moment and The End Does Not Satisfy
24. In many stories, the characters change a little bit at a time, but they won’t really change—deep down where it counts (and where it will stick)—until they realize how their beliefs are false. This revelation often happens all at once, right as they’re facing the biggest obstacle during the Climax.
Jami Gold,
Building a Character Arc: Start at the End
25. The strategic purpose of a denouement is to reorient the characters towards the next phase of their lives.
Jason Black,
Does your denouement murder your characters?
There are many names for the different points. To avoid confusion, I suggest picking one paradigm and sticking to it (with the addition of James Scott Bell’s mirror moment). But no matter which you choose, all the advice here should be easy enough to apply to the appropriate points in the your story.
Let’s recap. In a well-formed plot…
- The midpoint shift and mirror moment embody your main theme.
- Tension is escalated with the use of well-timed conflict, obstacles, and complicating coincidences.
- Your characters arc naturally because of the revelations, realizations, and crises they go through. In the process, they show more of themselves.
Creating a plot takes the courage to trust your choices, the stomach to nuke what isn’t working, and the perseverance to keep plugging away.
I won’t claim it’s easy. Sometimes I have to set a plot aside for a few days to see where it isn’t working. The problem might be in the themes or the plot points or the reactions. It might be that I’m unconsciously protecting my characters from the worst. There are a lot of areas to consider.
...The point is: a healthy plot is worth the effort.
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